Talk:Air Training Corps
Took the liberty of having a play with the first section a bit of re-formatting and will continue to expand certain bits.
The latest pictures and captions are crap gags from movies, nothing to do with the Air Cadets. I'm afraid that sort of thing does not work as it is like canned laughter saying "this bit is funny". That is a very strong sign that it isnt! If you get Air Cadet ones that go with the paragraph, then try to do a funny caption (see the one I added), it works better. Too many bullying references, so took some out, but added one as part of a joke to show a better way to do it. Cadet Ranks are good, I would try to give them even more of a personality if stuck for ideas to expand. If the Sergent is lazy, make him a fatty that has crisps on his jumper and is always nipping out for a Wagon Wheel; or the Corporal being "shouty" but gets home sick so never goes on camp! EStop 
⚓ 23:41, November 22, 2015 (UTC)
- Cheers Spike, haven't checked your edits yet but leave me the links, punctuation etc. to fix I have left all that just while writing and intend fixing later. EStop ⚓ 21:27, December 19, 2015 (UTC)
- Gliding will be a total re-write. I have done nothing to this piece after "Officer", so go wild! EStop ⚓ 21:30, December 19, 2015 (UTC)