UnNews talk:Birthday wish for world peace granted

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I have to say, I'm technologically impaired. If someone could import the pictures that I just randomly stuck in, that would be good. If someone could replace the text on the below picture with "Everyone's Great," then I will worship you as a god. Thanks! --LLBean

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From Pee Review[edit]

I'd like if I didn't just get a review, but also suggestions for improvement. Thanks! --LLBean

Humour: 8 Pretty funny, if anything at all maybe some more satire on the subject of world peace, very good though.
Concept: 7.5 Pretty good concept, been done a few times before but still good
Prose and formatting: 7 Good timing, just work on formatting paragraphs and such
Images: 8 Original and thought out. A tiny bit of photoshop never hurt, but improvement not necessary.
Miscellaneous: 9 Good length, good effort, good outcome
Final Score: 39.5 Nice article
Reviewer: TheLemonOfIchabod 20:53, 31 March 2007 (UTC)


Suggestions: You can get more ideas from making parodies of articles on various news sites, such as CNN.com. An OK example of this is: UnNews:Autobahn Minimum Speed Expected to Rise

From Pee Review 2[edit]

Not based on anything in the news, but I thought it was a fun idea. I think the pictures that aren't imported are a bit funky, but I don't know how to do anything with them, so some help there would be nice. Thanks! --LLBean

It's an excellent concept but you don't really follow it through in a news article kind of way. I'll edit it down a bit and make it more "UnNewsey" for you. If you don't like what I've done just revert it. --Kelpan 17:28, 6 April 2007 (UTC)