It's far more like a game than an article. I don't know if it's hilarious, but it needs help. Take your time reviewing it, and if you have ideas for expansion please tell me! Thank you! -- Le Cejak • <-> 05:58, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
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7
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Funny, but it gets a bit old. Work on the first page, too.
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| Concept:
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8
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V. funny, oddly realistic, and rather frightening. Altogether.
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| Prose and formatting:
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7
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Good, but the all-caps are a bit annoying. As is the constant valley-girl talk.
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| Images:
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8
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Loved the clown and the scientist, but find a few more photos, methinks.
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| Miscellaneous:
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8
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Hm. This should probably be in the games section.
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| Final Score:
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38
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Altogether, quite good. It appears that you have put a good deal of work into it.
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| Reviewer:
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--Vana 00:25, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
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