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Marching band

This article is constantly being edited by random bandos (including myself). For that reason, I would like some constructive criticism so that I (and a few other major contributors) can make necessary changes for a possible VFH nomination.--Unknown_user | Talk | Contribs | LULZ | AAN | MUN 01:54, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

Marching band is being reviewed by CajekHi! Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him

I usually don't look at the history so that I'm not biased, so I'm going to direct all my criticism directly at YOU, Unknown user, whoever you may be!   Le Cejak • <-> (Dec 7 / 05:59)

HEY! We're brothers in this crazy uncyc!   Le Cejak • <-> (Dec 7 / 06:00)

Humour:	6.4	Oh, oh christ it goes on and on and on! Oh jesus... AVG OF EACH SECTION. >:( Intro [5] Very long. Too long, in fact. We already know it's about marching bands. Don't strain yourself carrying that tuba, just toot it a few times and we'll be happy. Also, I'm pissed at having to read this crazily long article!!! 1 History 1.1 Early Days [4] Look, here's what I say: When I look at the title of the article, what do I expect to see? I certainly don't expect to see the civil war. 1.2 Hard Times [8] Yeah, that was pretty good. Still angry, though. 1.3 Revival [6] Well, at least it made sense. 2 Behind the Cult [7] Fine, fine, fine. Okay. 3 Basics [7] It's fine. 3.1 Marching [8] I hate laughing at this article. It's so long! 3.2 Band Camp [6] Hmmmm, you're heading back into randomness. Be sure to make us feel like we know what's going on, even when we don't. 4 Competitions [7] It's okay. 4.1 Judges [9] Yeah, kinda above average here. Kinda. 4.2 Major Competing Organizations [4] Nobody likes lists, dude. Get rid of it because I have no idea what you're parodying. 4.3 Parades [7] Good. 5 The All Powerful Gock [5] Randomness again. Either that or this is again a parody of something that I have no knowledge of. 6 Dr. Beat [7] Fine. 7 Portrait of a Marching Band 7.1 The Heirarchy [8] Above average LOL. 7.2 Leaders [7] it's okay. 7.3 Outsiders [6] It's just a list. I mean, it's not a BAD list, but in the context of soooooo many lists, it's not good. 7.4 Sectional Stereotypes [7] That was a pretty funny list. But it was STILL a list. 7.5 Enemies [6] list list list list list list list 8 You Know You're a Band Geek When... [4] Get rid of this section. You can do better.
Concept:	7	Yeah, no real concept confusion here. You have a lot of material, here. Way more than you need.
Prose and formatting:	6	Get rid of ANY section that scored below a 7. You might as well.
Images:	7	Pictures are suitable.
Miscellaneous:	6.6	Avg.
Final Score:	33	Follow what I said above. Thank god I'm done reading this, I have shit to do, man.
Reviewer:	Le Cejak • <-> (Dec 7 / 15:42)