Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Marching band
Marching band[edit]
This article is constantly being edited by random bandos (including myself). For that reason, I would like some constructive criticism so that I (and a few other major contributors) can make necessary changes for a possible VFH nomination.--Unknown_user | Talk | Contribs | LULZ | AAN | MUN 01:54, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
Marching band is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
I usually don't look at the history so that I'm not biased, so I'm going to direct all my criticism directly at YOU, Unknown user, whoever you may be! • <-> (Dec 7 / 05:59)
Humour: | 6.4 | Oh, oh christ it goes on and on and on! Oh jesus... AVG OF EACH SECTION. >:(
Very long. Too long, in fact. We already know it's about marching bands. Don't strain yourself carrying that tuba, just toot it a few times and we'll be happy. Also, I'm pissed at having to read this crazily long article!!!
Look, here's what I say: When I look at the title of the article, what do I expect to see? I certainly don't expect to see the civil war.
Yeah, that was pretty good. Still angry, though.
Well, at least it made sense.
Fine, fine, fine. Okay.
It's fine.
I hate laughing at this article. It's so long!
Hmmmm, you're heading back into randomness. Be sure to make us feel like we know what's going on, even when we don't.
It's okay.
Yeah, kinda above average here. Kinda.
Nobody likes lists, dude. Get rid of it because I have no idea what you're parodying.
Good.
Randomness again. Either that or this is again a parody of something that I have no knowledge of.
Fine.
Above average LOL.
it's okay.
It's just a list. I mean, it's not a BAD list, but in the context of soooooo many lists, it's not good.
That was a pretty funny list. But it was STILL a list.
list list list list list list list
Get rid of this section. You can do better. |
Concept: | 7 | Yeah, no real concept confusion here. You have a lot of material, here. Way more than you need. |
Prose and formatting: | 6 | Get rid of ANY section that scored below a 7. You might as well. |
Images: | 7 | Pictures are suitable. |
Miscellaneous: | 6.6 | Avg. |
Final Score: | 33 | Follow what I said above. Thank god I'm done reading this, I have shit to do, man. |
Reviewer: | • <-> (Dec 7 / 15:42) |