Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Mars Volta
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The Mars Volta[edit]
M'kay, so, I rewrote the existing Mars Volta article because a) it was listed for deletion anyway and b) it wasn't all that great. I would prefer someone familiar with TMV's music review this article, as it wouldn't make much sense to a non-fan. So yeah. Guildensternenstein 19:37, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
Skate1168 has sent out a colorful flashing box to distract you while he pees all over your article. He apologizes in advance for any seizures you may or may not have experienced. If there is no review in twenty-four hours, you should remove this picture.
| Humour: | 5 | This article wasn't exactly funny, but it had good lyrics for the song. To make your article more funny, I suggest reading HTBFANJS, although your article wasn't stupid at all. |
| Concept: | 8 | The concept for this article was a good one, heck, you included lyrics for the song! |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I don't think you made any spelling or grammar mistakes in your article, but it wasn't written in an normal encyclopedia-type sytle, but it is still pretty good! |
| Images: | 3 | Most of the images used in your article had almost absolutely nothing to do with the article, but the ones that did were good ones. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Pretty good article, so I gave the overall rating a 6 |
| Final Score: | 30 | Areas to focus on are: make it funny and have better images. |
| Reviewer: | Skate1168 02:07, 2 February 2009 (UTC) | |