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Tom Brady

Guildensternenstein 01:08, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

Skate1168 has sent out a colorful flashing box to distract you while he pees all over your article. He apologizes in advance for any seizures you may or may not have experienced. If there is no review in twenty-four hours, you should remove this picture.

Humour:	8	This article had good Humor in it. Good Work! :D
Concept:	8	This is a good concept to write about. I mean, it is about a "Famous" Football star.
Prose and formatting:	10	Their were no Grammar or Spelling mistakes in this article. I even learned how to spell douchebag from this article.
Images:	10	The images were AWESOME! You even included two youtube videos! EXCELLENT!
Miscellaneous:	9	This is the average rating of the article. Great Job! :D
Final Score:	45	This is a good article. You don't need to change a thing aabout it! :D
Reviewer:	Skate1168 15:25, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Drive-by: Uh, wow, it's amazing how much opinions can differ, I guess. Let's see, we're calling the guy a douche, a closet homosexual, a fucking tool... It's basically an anti-Brady rant, not much more than insults and a list. I'm sorry to say that if I'd been reviewing this, it would have scored significantly lower. This isn't so much humour as juvenile insults. Sorry to be so blunt, but I had to comment. Spend a little time with HTBFANJS, and maybe try to make the article a little less ranty, and not so full of blatant abuse - being more subtle is often funnier, y'know? Just a suggestion. Of course, this is only my opinion, and you may prefer the one you've already been given, which you are entitled to do. But I've been around here for a while, and my honest appraisal is that this is closer to deletion than highlight. Make of that what you will. --UU - natter 22:07, Feb 2